In my opinion, this piece is really fun to listen to when you're dozing off in your own daydream and just plain thinking. I really like the ambiance of this piece.
Well, this is your first stuff, so we won't expect too much. But this is good music right here. Just devote some time into it, and you'll go real far.
Thanks. I guess my next step will be to try and produce a legit dubstep track :)
I like the chord choices made in this song, and the synth melody sounds cool. Keep it up!
Thanks for the review man!
One thing I would have done is added a long bass drone to make the song a bit more soothing and relaxing. I'd say the melody doesn't fail though. Good job with your music.
Appreciate the feedback bro.
I liked the electronic beat at the background and the synth sound the notes are making. You seem to have a really good grasp at writing the music that sounds good.
There's a few things that need improvement:
* Bring your voice not from your head, but from the deep pits of your soul, just like you're doing with your guitar.
* Or even better, if you have an editing program like Audacity or something, you can record the guitar parts first, then focus on singing your song to the recording of your guitar.
I like the blues influence, and how you play your guitar, and I think you should do more songwriting in the future. If you could, I'd like to know the lyrics of this song.
Thank you, I used Audacity to make this!
Here are the lyrics:
Thirsty man goes to a well
To drink but doesn't see the sign
Every night in vain
Just like a broken heart
A broken heart would satisfy
all my broken dreams
My pain and aspirations
oh so far away
so far away
so far away
so far away
soooo far away yes yes
When I say I would rather leave then see your face again
I would go on with it
rather than despair
I wouldn't want to see you again
like my mind thrown in the garbage bin
and I don't feel quite right
ain't going to let it all blow over
saying it ain't quite right but its my life
Thanks for commenting
Nice use of the stereo. ^_^
lol ... i don't know what that means but i still love you. >:D
I really like whenever the drums kick in this song, and by the way, the melody is really nice.
Thank you so much for your comment @ Exgesis, Your comment made my night , I am getting confidence now to perform this in a program.
If it took you four hours to create this exotic space-masterpiece, what would 24 hours or more give you?
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